Tangled Quicksand
I reach for you through shifting ground,
But every step pulls me deeper,
Where echoes of anger coil around
The whispered love I keep in secret.
Your eyes are both anchor and abyss,
A storm I cannot tame nor flee.
The past and present intertwist,
A future that refuses to be.
I fight the pull of your memory,
Yet find solace in the ache.
Quicksand heart, wild and free,
I sink willingly, yet awake.
No bridge can span this fractured space,
No word undo the tangled trace.
Love and rage, a twisted dance,
An impossible future caught in chance.
Comments (1)
The simplicity of the words, and the short lines allow it to be easy to read, but then also able to be thought about without being bogged down in details. I like how “Sun shining, Cicadas trilling” is a positive set of lines that holds the middle of the poem. Good luck in the challenge😊