River Song
to a hawk
Those red feathers—crimson?
Scarlet? flashing the sky behind you, above your shadow calling to me,
swooping your thermal glide,
here over the river, where heat continues to rise.
Do my fins catch sun? silver, blue, and gold
I’m told water spends light differently, feel it filter-dance, dappling without
the green of leaves, fronds of gold splayed on shoals barely beneath
the surface. Ripples and currents deceiving the eye with sunsparkles
while stillness belies, forms the sound stagnation.
The depths have wonders and motion the glittering
surface cannot comprehend, ecosystems:
animal
vegetable
mineral.
flourishes of nourishment
decay
Time itself lurks and eddies
unchanged
by tricks of light.
The cypress rise from the deep, roots
emerging as knees where fish swim
and hawks light
emerald crowns, resting wings
bodies keeping feathery shadows
warm, devouring flesh
slaking thirst
breathing green air,
daring the sky
to learn how to swim.
About the Creator
Harper Lewis
I'm a subversive weirdo nerd witch who loves rocks. Intrusive rhyme bothers me. Some of my fiction may have provoked divorce proceedings in another state.😈
My words are mine. Suggest ai use and get eviscerated.
MA English literature, CofC
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Comments (2)
Like Paul, I love the way you describe the distinction between how light interacts with water and sky and love of course the majesty you allow hawks! Wonderful
This is dazzling. My favorite line: I’m told water spends light differently, feel it filter-dance, dappling without/the green of leaves, fronds of gold splayed on shoals barely beneath/the surface. Such a grand distinction of the element. I know how much you like hawks. Have you ever had one perch on your hand?