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For Our Lost Country

Remembering What We Once Held Dear

By Tim CarmichaelPublished about 18 hours ago 1 min read

I remember mornings

when sunlight spilled over dirt roads,

when possibility filled every conversation,

and voices carried trust, not suspicion.

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I mourn the slow decline

of civility, of hope present in daily life,

homes where laughter used to linger

now filled with tension and fear.

I mourn rivers we allowed them to choke,

landscapes scarred by neglect,

histories fading beneath our indifference.

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I mourn how we used to listen,

how dialogue-built friendships,

how neighbors met each other with recognition

and respect.

Now we speak in different languages and fury,

truth thinning like paper in a storm.

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I mourn not only what has vanished,

but what will be demanded in years ahead.

Our children inherit debts,

promises abandoned, burdens

imprinted on soil, sky, and law.

I grieve for ambition

that bends only to power,

and for voices silenced beneath its roar.

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Yet signs of strength remain:

those who refuse to surrender,

who plant gardens in broken paths,

who raise their voices against injustice,

who insist possibility still exists.

Even amid absence, even amid ruin,

something persists,

a memory of what might be restored,

a spark capable of becoming fire.

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I mourn with awareness,

holding both loss and hope

like fragile dreams,

shattered yet luminous,

waiting to catch sun once more.

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About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

I’m a firm believer life is messy, beautiful, and too short, which is why I write poems full of heart and humor. I am an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. My book Beautiful and Brutal Things is on Amazon, Link 👇

https://a.co/d/537XqhW

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  • Silver Dauxabout an hour ago

    Beautiful writing as always and deeply poignant. I love how you don't dismiss despair and distrust to show hope. Sorrow and hope can live together because hope is a choice and you've done a great job showing that. Loved this!

  • Andrea Corwin about 14 hours ago

    Truth in your poem - well done, Tim!!

  • Sam Spinelliabout 16 hours ago

    I admire you for your willingness and ability to hope. Sometimes I manage it, but for me it’s too easy to despair. I’m willing to let some of the hope you’re showing here be contagious to me as well. It helps that your writing is so good! this poem feels simultaneously mourning and uplifting. Impressive balance

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